求高人帮忙翻译成英文，在线等，

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找关键词的方法如需如下：

使用谷歌关键词规划词，建议广告词组时谷歌会给到你精准的推荐。

在亚马逊前台搜索栏：输入关键词会出现下拉菜单，挑选菜单内的关键词使用。

同款产品销量最高的几个listing的title和review中的热词。

相应类目和亚马逊前台左侧类目导航中的词，如“iphone”。

也可参考其它平台如ebay中同款产品的相应热词。

用一些关键词工具。

亚马逊关键字分两大块，一块是标题，这是最最重要的关键字，设置标题关键字的时候最好的形式是：品牌+ 名称+重要属性1,2,3+相关名称 +功能+参数<br>好的标题直接能够在搜索排序中获得好的位置。

就是亚马逊的search term，很多人都对这个感到过困惑，到底是用长关键字还是用短关键字，用逗号分隔还是用空格分隔。

search term 就是一个搜索引擎的关键字抓取的地方，当然是关键字越多越好，至于关键字长短倒不是很重要，但是要注意重复的关键字出现，那会被认为是关键字作弊。

用逗号属于精准定位，用户搜索的时候只有符号之间的关键是是有效的，例如，katoon，cell phone case，cell phone cover，只有用户输入全部的时候才会搜索到，如果用户输入phone case katoon，那就可能搜不到了，如果用空格表示模糊搜索，关键字的任意组合都可能被搜索到。

关键词是基于产品产生的。所以不同的产品可以用同样的关键词，如果觉得它跟你的产品有关联的话就可以搜索。

投稿Energy，35天后返回修改，给的大修，求教有经验的虫友如何回复审稿意见比较好。另外，为什么附件里只有一个人的审稿人意见？

Dear***,

The review of this paper is now complete, and I am including the Reviewers' reports (directly at the end of this email and sometimes as attachments).  As you can see, one Reviewer recommends rejection, and the others recommend possible reconsideration after major revisions.  If you are able to revise the manuscript thoroughly in response to the Reviewers' comments, I believe that it would be suitable for second review.  I should add that, in view of the strong criticisms, anything but a thorough response and revision would just be an unfortunate waste of time.

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Thank you for your interest in ENERGY.

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: Through a thorough reading and reviewing, the reviewer suggests that the following problems should be addressed and the manuscript should be modified.

1. Keywords should contain "Lauric acid".  

2.  XRD results reveal that the IKL and LA/IKL have the same diffraction peak at 2<theta>of 7.8o, indicating that the LA molecules are mainly located on the IKL surface rather than the inner-layer. Please discuss in more detail.

3. In the FTIR spectra, there are no peaks at 3670 and 3624 cm-1, please check why?

4. The authors note that the LA drives the IKL to exfoliate, which may afford an increase of specific surface area for LA/IKL. However, BET results reveal an obvious reduction of specific surface area. Is there any other reason for this reduction, for example the LA/IKL aggregation? Since SEM images imply that LA/IKL has larger size than IKL.

5. Please check the result of the impregnation ratio of LA in LA/IKL (51.5 wt%), which should be about 58 wt%.

Reviewer #2: This manuscript reported a novel form-stable phase change material (FSPCM) for thermal energy storage which was prepared by*******. I have read the whole paper and find that this study is simple and less novelty. The very similar work been published in Journal of Materials Science &Engineering (Preparation and Thermal Properties of Binary Organic / kaolin Composites as Shape-stabilized Phase Change Material for Thermal Energy Storage, 2013, 31, 268-272.) In addition, the Ref. 19 and Ref. 29 have been cited repeatedly. Therefore, this paper in present stage could not be accepted for publication in Energy.

Reviewer #3: COMMENTS:

(1) The authors need to be careful in their English usage. Therefore, full of the paper should be reviewed. Especially, some sentences in the introduction section are lack of continuity.

(2) What is LOI in Table 1? Please clearly write it.

(3) On page 4, line 7, "The suspension was ultrasonic at 70 oC for 2 h…." should be corrected as "The suspension was kept in ultrasonic bath at 70 oC for 2 h…."

(4) The performances of energy storage and release of composite PCMs are substantially dependent on their thermal conductivity. Therefore, the thermal conductivity of the composite PCM is important parameter in thermal energy storage applications.  Please clarify the why did the authors measure the thermal conductivity value of the composite PCM. It is possiblethe authors should be provided the thermal conductivity value of the composite PCM.

(5) There are some writing errors in the text. For example

---On page 1, line 24, "kaolinite is one ….. " should be "Kaolinite is one ….."

---On page 1, line 59, "In recently years, ….." should be corrected as "In recent years , …."

---On page 5, line 1, "Differential scanning calorimety (DSC) was carried out….." should be

    corrected as "Differential scanning calorimety (DSC) measurements were carried out…."

---On page 5, line 15, "The morphology and microstructure was….." should be corrected as "The morphology and microstructure were….."

---On page 6, line 58, "FTIR spectroscopy and the results is shown….." should be corrected as "FTIR spectroscopy and the results are shown .."

---On page 7, line 19, "The adsorption peaks at 2923 cm-1 and 2854 cm-1 is caused….." should be corrected as "The adsorption peaks at 2923 cm-1 and 2854 cm-1 are caused.."

---On page 8, line 19, "…… of mespores below …..." should be corrected as "…… of mesopores below ……."

---On page 8, line 47, "……SEM images were made." should be "…SEM images were obtained.

---On page 9, in the caption of section 3.5 "thermal properties…..." should be corrected as "Thermal properties……"

(4) The following papers can be useful to more clearly understanding the form-stable composite PCM:

---Capric-myristic acid/expanded perlite composite as form-stable phase change material for latent heat thermal energy storage, Renewable Energy  Volume: 33   Issue: 12   DEC 2008 Pages: 2599-2605   

---Preparation, characterization and thermal properties of Lauryl alcohol/Kaolin as novel form-stable composite phase change material for thermal energy storage in buildings, Applied Thermal Engineering, Volume 59, Issues 1-2, 25 September 2013, Pages 336-347

---Structures and thermal properties of fatty acid/expanded perlite composites as form-stable phase change materials Energy and Buildings, Volume 68, Part A, January 2014, Pages 587-592

---Preparation, characterization and thermal properties of lauric acid/expanded perlite as novel form-stable composite phase change material, Chemical Engineering Journal  Volume: 155   Issue: 3   Pages: 899-904   Published: DEC 15 2009

---Preparation, thermal properties and thermal reliability of eutectic mixtures of fatty acids/expanded vermiculite as novel form-stable composites for energy storage Journal of Industrial and Engineering Chemistry  Volume: 16   Issue: 5   Pages: 767-773   Published: SEP 25 2010

你按审稿人的建议认认真真地修改，特别是第二个审稿人，说你的论文simple and less novelty，这是很大的硬伤，这个问题不解决，很难录用的。还有你们细节太不注意了，英语写作也要提高。

好好根据审稿意见修改文章，特别是意见不好的那位。每一天都要回复，并说明文章是怎么带的，或者对审稿意见进行解释。

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